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MWfWW1 Follow-up

February 6, 2013 | Posted in: Homework Assignments

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Watch this video to understand tonight’s assignment.

4:02pm – The video is still processing.  You can also view it here: http://vimeo.com/59094587

STEP 1 (Click to reread your classmates’ ideas for keeping the story under control.)

STEP 2: Post a comment to THIS post explaining who you think did a great job creating a story that was under control, so that the problem was actually solvable.  Remember, we’re focusing on who did a GOOD job, not who was less successful.

STEP 3:  Optional – If you think that you can revise your ideas from yesterday to make your story more “under control,” feel free to do so by replying to your post from YESTERDAY.

20 Comments

  1. 1213-14
    February 6, 2013

    I think 12 did a good job because 12’s story make sense and it solve the problem.Also I like 12’s story

  2. 1213-9
    February 6, 2013

    I think every bodys was great and there all possible solutions to the problem in the story.

  3. 1213-7
    February 6, 2013

    I think everybody did good but I really liked 1213-6’s about the Sesame Street .

  4. 1213-5
    February 6, 2013

    I think they were all good ideas because they showed creativity and personality.

  5. 1213-13
    February 6, 2013

    I think most people in the class did a great job but I realy liked 1213-6 because I love sesame street (I think it would be a little better if Cookie monster was in it)

  6. 1213-13
    February 6, 2013

    im just bragging for cookie monster

  7. 1213-16
    February 6, 2013

    I like the super powers one because 11’s story could be the second book and the first one could be how she got super powers like she could be from a different planet or a meteor hit her and gave her super powers or something like that.

  8. 1213-12
    February 6, 2013

    I think 17`s story was great because it is creative, manageable, and fun. Also I enjoyed 18`s because it was funny with the giant claw and the herd of monkeys.

  9. 1213-11
    February 6, 2013

    i think 8 and 7 did a great job and solved my problem and then ended so good that the author didnt get stuck in a corner

  10. 1213-21
    February 6, 2013

    I think everyone had a very good answers to the question but I really liked 12s idea.It was creative.

  11. 1213-11
    February 6, 2013

    i also think that 6 did an awesome job with it because i love sesame street mostly that red dude ELMO!!!!!!!!!! and big bird

  12. 1213-1
    February 6, 2013

    I think 17 did a good job because he made the cause be different and make the whole story be different.

  13. 1213-3
    February 6, 2013

    i think 12 did a :] 🙂 job because it has a really big surprise in it

  14. 1213-10
    February 6, 2013

    I think 12 did a great job because that is very creative

  15. 1213-22
    February 6, 2013

    i think #2 did a good job because his story was great i like it

  16. 1213-2
    February 6, 2013

    I think 1213-12 did a good job because it turns the problem of the basement flooding into something fun, with a pool that you never have to refill because it could refill itself with the flooding water. She also finds a solution without forgetting what the problem was in the beginning.

  17. 1213-15
    February 6, 2013

    I think 12 did a good job because the problem was solvable and it was a fun story

  18. 1213-18
    February 7, 2013

    I think #19 did a good job because it was cool how # 19 used the vacuum cleaner and sucked all the water out of the house.I love it! 🙂

  19. 1213-6
    February 7, 2013

    I think #12 had a really strong answer. I loved it

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